| You won a competition and received a vacation for two as a prize. Write a letter to invite a friend to go with you. In the letter – tell about the competition you won, – specify what kind of vacation it is, – explain why you want your friend to be there. |
Dear Brajesh,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to share a piece of great news with you. I won a quiz show organized by our local Rotary Club and the prize is a week’s vacation for two in Pokhara. I [tie_tooltip text=”wish to enjoy” gravity=”n”]wish enjoy[/tie_tooltip] this vacation with you and I hope you will not disappoint me by saying no.
This quiz show was a big event. There were 200 participants in the beginning and there were 10 rounds in all. It was not easy and the questions became tougher with every passing round. You remember, during our college days, you always encouraged me to take part in quiz competitions but I never won any prize. This time I was lucky. The questions that came to me were easy for me and I could answer them easily. As I won the prize, I immediately thought of you. You always had faith in me.
The vacation is for one week in Pokhara. We can go any time in the month of December. Would the last week be convenient for you? We could enjoy Christmas and New Year both. [tie_tooltip text=”I would like” gravity=”n”]I like [/tie_tooltip] to have this vacation with you so that we can share nostalgic memories of our college [tie_tooltip text=”days” gravity=”n”] day [/tie_tooltip]and also enjoy the lakes of Pokhara.
Hoping to hear from you soon!
Yours lovingly,
Samana Khatri
Band = 9.0
Task Achievement 9
- Answer all parts of the question
- Present relevant ideas
- Fully explain ideas
- Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
- Minimum word count
Lexical Resources: 8.5
- Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
- Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
- Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
- Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
- Use correct grammatical structure
Coherence & Cohesion: 8.5
- Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
- One main idea per paragraph
- Include an introduction and conclusion
- Support main points with an explanation and then an example
- Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
- Vary your linking