Many people say that we now live in ‘consumer societies’ where money and possessions are given too much importance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that (paraphrase of Many people say that) we live in a materialistic world and that we value money too highly. In my opinion, some people are extremely money-oriented (this should be the first body paragraph), but many of us place more importance on other values(this should be the second body paragraph).
Common Mistake:
- Trying to give a balanced answer by writing “some people” and “other people” think. This question asks for your views, not the views of other people. Notice how the above introduction makes it clear that the essay is a mix of two different views with an indication of your personal view. T
- The question is talking about many people’s opinions and we should write our answer accordingly. It would be a mistake if we start with We live in a materialistic world and that …
Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example for young people.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that some celebrities are known for their glamorous lifestyles rather than for the work they do. While I agree that these celebrities set a bad example for children, I believe that other famous people act as positive role models.
