Writing Task of Kabita Bhandari, Mock Test 16

Band: 5.5

✍ TASK ACHIEVEMENT/RESPONSE: 5.5

✔ Selects the main/key features of the graph, chart, map, or process

✖ Write a clear and concise overview

✔ Support ideas with accurate details, examples, and explanations

✔ Writes more than 150/250 words

✔ Shows clear paragraphing

✖ Presents correlations and exceptions

✖ Progressive development of paragraphs

✖ Presents a clear thesis statement

✍ COHERENCE AND COHESION: 6.0

✔ Structure answers in logical paragraphs

✔ Includes an introduction and conclusion

✔ Uses referencing

✙ Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

✙ Varies linking phrases using synonyms

✍ LEXICAL RESOURCE: 5.5

✙ Uses a wide range of vocabulary

✙ Tries to vary vocabulary using accurate synonyms

✖ Accurate work for spelling and word formation

✙ Uses Compound Words

✖ Uses Topic specific vocabulary

✖ Use of phrasal verbs

✖ Use of prefabricated sentence structures

✍ GRAMMATICAL RANGE: 5.0

✙ Uses a variety of complex and compound sentences

✖ Error-free sentences e.g Units was measured in dollors…, were sold at about…., little bit less to 18 billion, if these people know… 

✙ Use of a wide range of grammar structure

✖ Perfect use of formal/informal tone and style

✖ Uses emphatic sentence structures