Writing Task of Kabita Bhandari, Mock Test 16

Band: 5.5

TASK ACHIEVEMENT/RESPONSE: 5.5

Selects the main/key features of the graph, chart, map, or process

Write a clear and concise overview

Support ideas with accurate details, examples, and explanations

Writes more than 150/250 words

Shows clear paragraphing

Presents correlations and exceptions

Progressive development of paragraphs

Presents a clear thesis statement

COHERENCE AND COHESION: 6.0

Structure answers in logical paragraphs

Includes an introduction and conclusion

Uses referencing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Varies linking phrases using synonyms

LEXICAL RESOURCE: 5.5

Uses a wide range of vocabulary

Tries to vary vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Accurate work for spelling and word formation

Uses Compound Words

Uses Topic specific vocabulary

Use of phrasal verbs

Use of prefabricated sentence structures

GRAMMATICAL RANGE: 5.0

Uses a variety of complex and compound sentences

Error-free sentences e.g Units was measured in dollors…, were sold at about…., little bit less to 18 billion, if these people know… 

Use of a wide range of grammar structure

Perfect use of formal/informal tone and style

Uses emphatic sentence structures

 

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