Rajesh Bishwokarma, Academic Writing Task 1 and 2, Mock Test 17

IELTS Band Score 5.5

Task Achievement/Response:  6.0

  • Support ideas with details, examples, and explanations
  •  Writes more than 150/250 words
  • Writes a clear overview
  •  Shows clear paragraphing
  •  No clear presentation of correlations and exceptions
  •  No progressive development of paragraphs
  •  Presents a thesis statement

 ✍COHERENCE AND COHESION: 5.5

  •  Cannot structure answers in logical paragraphs
  •  Includes an introduction and conclusion but not precise
  •  Rare referencing
  • Repeated use of same linking word
  • Use cohesive linking words quiet appropriately
  • Varies linking phrases using synonyms

  ✍ LEXICAL RESOURCE: 5.5

  • Limited range of vocabulary
  • Use of less common vocabulary
  • Tries to vary vocabulary using synonyms
  •  Mistaken work for spelling and word formation
  • Uses Compound Words
  • Uses Topic specific vocabulary to some extent
  • Rare use of phrasal verbs
  • Rare use of prefabricated sentence structures

 ✍ GRAMMATICAL RANGE: 5.0

  • Tries to use a variety of complex and compound sentences
  • Persistent grammar errors e.g Sharply increased in a large scale…, life get easier to survive…, education is the most part of life…
  • Often repeated grammar structures
  • Use of informal tone and style e.g as we know…
  • no use of emphatic sentence structures

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